I fought alone with my fate,
I fought alone with my life,
I cleared all thorns on my way,
I gathered all the courage to thrive,
But now I cannot cherish alone this prosperity,
When you will come, oh my would be wife!
Come in my life soon,Make me feel better,
We have so far lived all alone,Let's spend some time together,
I have no courage to face these lone evenings,will prefer dying rather!
Inne senti kaise ho gaye?? New side of the coin.....as it goes beyond the traditional defined "UDIT" ... hope you get the dream one soon.....
ReplyDeletegood start, flow is maintained as well.
ReplyDeleteAbey kya ho gaya tujhe..... ????????
ReplyDeleteitna senti.......
Aane waali kab aaegi???? dhoond rahe hai hum sab jiko... koi toh bata.... :)
Oye sentiments ki dukaan...sab theek-thaak..??
ReplyDeleteInstead of putting these lines here...put it on a Matrimonial site...you will get better responses and can find a companion for your lone evenings ;)
and one more thing...
"If you are lonely when you are alone, you are in bad company.BEWARE!!!"
keeping jokes aside...those above words seem to be emanating directly from your heart...hopefully they will find the suitable heart to dwell...Good luck!!
ReplyDeleteI can make a point here....these lines are going to be big hits.....
ReplyDeleteYou quote like oscare wilde
well, not bad!! gud thoughts, nice way to pen it down :)
ReplyDeletewaise tum dono ko jab milna hoga tab miloge, aur hum bhi dekhenge ki how much u feel better ;)
BTW, "Let's spend some time together" ke badle "Let's spend rest of life together" jyada romantic sound karega ;)
-Nivedita
Even rest of the life with her will be like only few moments :). So, its same :P.
ReplyDeleteI want more. :)